fiery star12/10/07 02:45 pm1: Chapter 1Signed

this is brilliant!!*applause!*

you are the most brilliant writer i have ever seen!!! every one of those friendships were just perfected when you told them!!! and erestor and glorfindel- now THAT was hilarious!!!!! the little details you put into your stories are just incredible!!! the whole thing about glorfindel running around after erestor catching what he was throwing, and if erestor was about to throw something valuable, glorfindel would just calmly replace it with something else! priceless!!!

also, another thing that made me laugh was the image in my head of aragorn twisting poor legolas' ear!!! how mean, yet it completely works with the story!!!!

i could go on forever, but to sum it up, congradulations on this story!!! its a complete masterpiece!

 

fiery star 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Fiery Star! First off, anyone who says I'm 'the most brilliant writer they have every seen' is A-ok in my book! Secondly, I'm glad you liked Glorfindel and Erestor the best. I tried to make Legolas and Aragorn the 'main' characters, but whenever 'Fin and 'Restor enter my fics they always take over! I just can't help loving those two - the classic 'odd couple'. 

Thanks again,

Pentangle 


Elemmire08/25/06 06:05 pm1: Chapter 1Signed

*wild, rampaging cheers* Yes! Ai, friendship is sweet coming from you. Sweet in pain, in trail, in hope, in laughter, and in the quiet. This is a Pentangle-classic, to be treasured forever when sorrow comes upon this world like a lance. The opening was beautiful... a casual night in Imladris, with little secrets to awaken in the darker places, that only you would know.

*~*Elrond and Lolindir*~*

I'm so glad Elrond has such a friend. It is nice to see him able to relax in said ease. I suppose this wouldn't be the same Lolindir who dashed his life out on the rocks because of poppy syrup, huh? I thought it funny that you used the same name. ' "Anyone who wanted to speak with me recieved the Eyebrow of Doom." Lolindir laughed aloud. "You know about that?" "Of course I do. I know every name I am called. What sort of All-Knowing, Mysterious Wielder of Elven Power would I be if I did not?" ' Aye, Elrond, then you would know of Elly? Escaping an angry Celeborn? Your inventions are unflagging Pentangle! Could you do a one shot on that? A little fluff never hurt Elrond and Celebrian! It was short, but beautiful.

*~*Elrohir and Morgil*~*

The fear is so true. So true. ' In the mind of every ruler's son, be he man, Elf, or Dwarf, lingers the fear that perhaps he does not deserve all he has been given- all that is his simply because of who his father is. ' You have the elegance is showed in the well put balance of humour, drama, and elements surprise that you bring through your writing. ' There was no way to tell who sprang first... ' pprrrr. It developes quite a pleasent picture in my mind*clears throat guiltily*. I've always imagined Elrohir as an attractive Elf, and that picture is (*sound of steam*). Your lissomeness in writing is astonishing, and I could of asked for none better an ending... "Elrohir. Call me Elrohir." It shows, I think, a hint of wariness still, yet the want of a friend, and the willingness to try. Thank you.

*~*Elladan and Lindir*~*

I believe this is one of my favourite looks on Elladan and Lindir. Both got somethin' to hide, or wish to hide that really doesn't need to be hidden. ' "And he will listen politely to your dissuasion, then kill me anyway. In fact, while listening he will be thinking of a creative approach to my exection. No thank you." ' How many times can I say I love your writing? To put it differently, how many ways can I say I love your writing without saying the exact some thing? We are going to see. Yes! YOU have made my day the lighter to my shoulders. I love these two! Just a question, how long is seven yen? (Lindir is so sweet! Like an adorable puppy!) 

*~*Glorfindel and Erestor*~*

Beautiful! I love it dearly! The chess set, the artifacts! ' Still Glorfindel being Glorfindel, he did not actually try to stop Erestor. ' O, priceless! Born on the wrong side of the blanket? I kicked out! This is marvelous! I'm not in a very good mood today (not going to say *why*) but just thinking of it makes me smile- then laugh, then laugh harder, then cry. ' Glorfindel gave him an 'E' for effort, even if some of the larger pieces of furniture were still usable. He looked around with the eye of a connoisseur and whistled, "Not bad for a beginner." ' Ai! Pentangle you are born of heaven! ' Erestor said with great dignity, "I have a headache." ' I love it so much, I'm gonna memorize some of it... then read it again! Who can do more damage? Erestor or Elrond(in Enchain)? The poor plume... skitter beetle!

~*Aragorn and Legolas*~*

My favourite pair! ' "At first it seemed Legolas would not answer, but after a vicious swipe at an innocent firefly he said in a whisper, "Two days." ' Do not make me weep. That is an order. ' "It is not just you. And if I ever hear you couple yourself and the word'craven' again, I will not be held accountable for the consequenses!" ' True, I believe him. ' "So. Something- we do not know what- will happen. It will be soon- but we do not know exactly when. And I am to be ready to fly my home at the slightest word, and to put my trust in an impetuous, head strong human." ' Exactly so! It is so funny how you do it, and how credible it is! You, I am shocked still at your finesse, and your adroitness! You still are a beauty- the very meaning of grace!

And what is so impossible about Sauron knitting sweaters for indeigent hobbits?

Laughing,
Elemmire


Kari08/06/06 12:33 am1: Chapter 1Anonymous

I only read the aragorn and legolas part because I don't know some of the other people so I stuck with what I knew. I totally enjoyed it though. My favorite line was the bit about Sauron knitting sweaters for hobbits. Thank you also for unintentionally telling me about this site. I am Neko-cat-sama from fanfiction.net. Just to clarify things.


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