Nicely paced and depicted, keep up the good work. Look forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie for your words, there's more to go... evil grin...
Sivan Shemesh
amberanise
12/09/06 01:07 am
6: Chapter 6
Anonymous
I love this story as it shows wonderfully realistic scenario and the way you have drawn the relationships between the fathers and their sons is believable.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your sweet words, i'm glad that you like it.