Really, you only have 're-formed' words. So I had little right to drone on as I did, and you handled it well, all considered(I also had a bad day). I am at fault still. It's the "Sweet Eru" and "Valar" (etc) that rubbed me the wrong way. So you can blow up at me if you want... but it is still the same to me, the words, even though it may not be to you. So... I am so sorry... again. Really. You don't have to be. I really do love this story though!

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That was fun! It made me think of "Monster" by Frank Peretti (which is a totally awesome book!) It failed to make sense in a few lines, and you switched tenses in the middle somewhere (...Aragorn presses himself up... [vs. your common past tense]) and I found your language less than appealing, and much less needed. (Question: what did it ever do to make it worth using? Do people suddenly enjoy a story because of cuss words?) Not to be rude, but I think using language is. Other than that, this story is excellent! A wild ride that was a pleasure even in its length. You are popular for a reason- and this is proof!

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