O my goodness! That was amazingly good. I really liked it. I'm so sorry, but I never expected to like it so much! Some points confused me, as for a point I thought Legolas found a door, but stone was behind it. Not sure where that was... But, they do get out- don't they? Is this in Moria, or a cave in Mirkwood or something? A few points showed why you didn't get the perfect number one in the "Boo!" but it was great. I enjoyed this much more than "For a Friend" and can see a florishing writer in you, White Wolf, so keep it up!
Elemmire (Look at Pentangle's "Blood Weald" It's for the same contest and scored second place! I wish it got first...)
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked this story so much. Because it was written for the Teitho Halloween contest, the main thrust of it was to create a scary atmosphere. I leave a lot of the answers up to the reader. To me giving all the details of the where and how and what would have taken away from the mystery of the story. I really have no idea where this takes place. If you need it to be Moria, or Mirkwood or someplace else, that's fine. I've been writing for a long time, but I always strive to get better. I not only write for Teitho, but I also vote, so I've read all the stories submitted, including "Blood Weald", which is ver good. Thanks for the review.
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