| Fishpaste | 11/22/07 09:25 pm | 1: Going home | Anonymous |
Wonderful, completly and utterly wonderful. You do not need to practise writing, you are already a brilliant author! Trust Aragorn to get injured again. I wonder how many times he's come home in that fashion?lol |
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| Elemmire | 11/18/06 04:09 pm | 1: Going home | Signed |
I am glad he made it home. This was really good for not being your first language! The worst problem, I think, was something very trivial... you did "orc's" instead of "orcs" having the apostrophe in it made it possesive, not plural. It is a common mistake, and just needs practice to get out of. I liked it! Good work, Jamie_88! I'd enjoy seeing more!
Elemmírë Star-Sheen |
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| Kari | 08/06/06 12:17 am | 1: Going home | Anonymous |
| Very interesting. I liked it. |
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| Michelle | 03/29/06 07:37 pm | 1: Going home | Signed |
Since I just read it to validate it, I can just as well leave you a review:) This has potential, keep going! I think it could be longer, maybe you could expand on the orc episode and "zoom in" a bit, be there with Aragorn instead of telling what happened. But in any case, I'd love to see a sequel. Elrond needs to make it all better *g*.
Author's Response: Thank's for your review, i really appreciate it! maybe i'll write a sequel someday, i don't know yet... |
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