This is so sweet and sad. I love it. Evermind... so gentle and true. (I must apologize greatly for my last review to you... I was wrong to drone on like that. Please, please, please forgive me? I am at fault... I'm sorry. I do enjoy that story very much, very much) I find little to correct in this, and your style of writing adds to the beauty. Almost simplistic, yet it has an elegant light. I liked it. The tradition is sweet. Elemmire
Author's Response: Thank you. And I think I must apologize here. I had a very bad day when I read your review, and I guess it just rubbed me the wrong way. I should think before I write. Althoug, I still want to know where I used inappropriate language in that story. So, if you have the time, it would be great f you could tell me. I am glad you like this story. I thik itis a very poignant story and few actually like it because of that. So, I am dubble happy that you like it. *g* | 