O... kay. (How many spirits does Nimrodel have? I would of figured *cough* one, but you missed the " ' " in spirit's, so it came out as spirits) I found this, sadly, very hard to follow. Was there just a big hole in a barn stall, in which perchanced Nimrodel's bones? Where was Nimrodel in Gondor? It would of taken *many* more days to get back to Moria than just three and then Lorien. (You had said Aragorn had four days in the beginning to his Bday, then you showed night, so one day off...) How on Arda could Nimrodel know Legolas? Unless you play for the extreme in AU, she should not of known of our friend the prince. Recall, in the books he had admitted to never traveling down far passed Imladris, and the song he sung had told of Amroth crossing over the sea, then diving into the water to go back for his lady, and was never seen again. Your explanation is fine by me, just give us a heads up on the AU! Over all, a good idea... gone a little haywire. Elemmire |