I am afriad I guessed as much, Eowyn ... and though you had a few punctuation problems, and spelling "straight" as "strait" yet it was good. Not very good, but not poor. Maybe it was because you made it to predictable, if you had given more cases on which Faramir would worry the story would have gone better. That is all I can say, except this: keep writing, you'll get better in ever way! Elemmire |
