Very nice at emotion, I liked some lines, but other made no sense, like "That I thought I would / Never face again." I can't seem to stop critiquing you, can I? *laughs at self* Also, (this has nothing to do with the poem) it is pretty much useless to put ReadandReview at the bottom of a story. Cuz' the person most likely would have read it. I know, I give you permission to hit me upside the head now. I'm kinda hyper, so these words are not said from a very somber, serene wisest-o-the-wise reviewer at the time. Forgive me.

Elemmire, gone a little of the deep end... ya know, I really love Elvish rope. It ties you to the shallows quite nicely.