| Alora | 09/10/06 03:24 am | 1: Enitre Story | Anonymous |
that was a great story alot of suspence, Im sure i will read it again |
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| Elemmire | 08/23/06 05:55 pm | 1: Enitre Story | Signed |
Hi, I decided to review before my eyes fell out of my head. Your humour seems a little forced, and you use "elder Elf" to much, so I couldn't understand if you meant one of the twins, Legolas or Elrond. The last note I wish to put in is simply this: TO LONG for ONE chapter! You should break it down into four or five, or no matter how much determanation a person has to start with, you are going to scare them to death! I *will* read this, all, if you put it into chapters. I think you may recieve more hits and be assured that people like you with more reviews. And you need tell the computer this story is complete. Go to your account and click "Edit/Delete Stories" and then check off the box that has next to it "Story Complete?" This story doesn't seem half bad, but...
Waiting,
Elemmire (Leave a note for me at one of my stories, if you please, if you break it down into chapters, then I will come back and take a look. You don't have to read the story, just be careful if you rate it. Don't need people thinking I stink at writing. And then check out Pentangle's "Buried: series" it is sweet stuff!) |
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| Amanda | 03/15/06 06:16 pm | 1: Enitre Story | Anonymous |
| I loved this story! You see, my person in the Lord of the Rings is Legolas so I thought this story was great. Did you write any morre? If you didn't, please write so more. Good job! From,an Elf friend
Author's Response: I know that this is probably a really late response(almost 2 years wow), but I thought better late than never. Thank you so much for your review. It means a lot. I have an account on fanfiction, where I have another weaker uncompleted story. I am, however, working on another one that I will post relatively soon on fanfiction. Thanks Again. From a thankful Dunedain |
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