*screams* AUHAHAHAHA! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ARAGORN?!?!?!?! That was the most graceful writing I have seen on here apart from Pentangle. It wavered, on things that kinda irked me, but only kinda. You really have some talent, you just need to fine tune it now. I mean, dude, what in Arda have you done to Aragorn? What, by Elbereth, does *this* have to do with Mithrandir? You give me hope that all is not lost in this world of rabid Legolas fangirls, and the sap-crap of Aragorn and Arwen(even though this Arwen/Aragorn part was rather ify). This actually held out well. You have set the bar high for yourself, so you've gotta own it every time you reopen on a new chapter, and make it better. This story was made all the more powerful by the music I had playing before I returned to my trusty laptop *cough cough naneth's laptop cough* to read. I thought it matched very well... "Is my imagination running away or is/All this really happening to me?" not everything matched, but when my mind focused, the snippets I heard were perfect. (In case anyone is wondering, the song is by Kutless on "The Music Inspired by the CoN(Chronicles of Narnia)" the name of the song is More than it Seems. Very Christian based. Gotta love that song) Elemmire Um, if you would be so kind, I would be honoured if you reviewed one of my stories, or even Pentangle's "Choosing" Cheers and Mushrooms! |
