"When we complete the quest. Not if." Very good! I love Frodo so much, I'm glad you put him in there! Ai, you are my kind of girl! "Is aught wrong?" Yes, thank you! Talking like a Middle-earthian! Good! So few have the wit to do so! Very well! I'm not sure the nightmare was the right key for your story- it certainly got the point across, but... it lacked something, or was not the right tool. Sadly, I cannot explain why or futher my point! Ah well, that is how it goes with my mind. Beautiful work still, I am surely going to read more of your works!

Gen hannon,
Elemmire