This is much better! A fine flow, almost desperate, and so bitterly sweet! Poetry fits very well in your hand! Simple, well ordered, very strong. I liked it. Very good. I would ask pointers from you on my poetry!
Elemmírë Star-Sheen
Author's Response: *celebrates* Yay, the second poem I ever wrote is a success! As soon as I have a chance, I'll review your stuff. :-) Calenlass Greenleaf |
