At last I may review! I looked you up on fanfiction and fancied that I would like you! Christian? *bows Elven fashion* Mae govannen, sister! I must agree it flowed roughly, but it never tangled. It is a pleasure to read, no mystery, just a gentle truth, an idea that is here shared. Very fine in its underlaying current, and if you would take some time to smooth the surface, it would be a surefire winner! Very nice. I just adore poetry, but never seem to really grip the whole idea. Elemmire Star-Sheen (Forget not Menelmacar)
Author's Response: I'm happy to find another sister on this site. :-) For me, I can't even rhyme. Honest'y, I've tried, but it always ends up sounding stiff and awkward. So I settled with prose. Hmm...Maybe I will revise it. It was my first prose poem that I ever wrote, so their's plenty I can change. Thanks for the review! |
