Mirach06/01/09 11:38 am20: Chapter 19 - No AnswersSigned

Erestor the Endless Elocutionist :) I like how he cares for Aragorn like an old teacher that's worried for his pupil.

This chapter felt like a real edge of hope, with the thoughts on suicide as the Black Breath is taking hold of him. But even there is his strength shown - I think that most would obey and end their life. 



Author's Response:

Thank you... I'm so glad you mentioned that you could still see Aragorn's strength even in his despair, because that's what I was trying to show.  I think Aragorn can be pushed to the very edge, but his inherent sense of hope won't ever completely fail him. 

And Erestor... he's just fun to write, that guy!  Thanks again for the review!


lady_roisin04/04/09 02:37 am20: Chapter 19 - No AnswersSigned
More amazing angst! I really feel for Aragorn. I wish I could hug him, and not to mention fix his wounds! The poor guy! I love your Erestor too. I'll have to make sure Eli reads this chapter, he'll be thrilled Erestor is in here. I really do love how you write your Elves. I feel so bad for Halbarad, he got knocked around pretty good didn't he? I hope he'll be alright! I am really enjoying this. Sorry I've been getting so very behind on my reading. It was well worth the wait though!

Author's Response: Thanks!  Again, glad you liked this chapter... and don't worry about being behind; to me, it's interesting to hear from readers who are reading larger chunks of the story at a stretch instead of just one chapter at a time (I'm really anxious to hear from some of those I know are waiting to read the thing in its entirety... I want to know how it holds up as a complete "novel").   Anyway, yes, Aragorn's really at the breaking point... or nearly.  Even though Elrond is too busy with Halbarad, at least he had Erestor to give him just enough comfort to get him by a bit longer, but he really does need his father, doesn't he?  I'm glad you like my version of the Rivendell Elves.  I'm trying hard to make them unique from all the other versions of them out there... there's similarities of course because of canon but I do hope I've put my own spin on them.  Update coming soon... probably Monday or Tuesday.  Thanks for the review!

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