Another fabulous chapter! Forgive the lateness in reading and reviewing. But the wait to read this was well worth it! I like your dialogue during the arguement between Denlad and Aragorn, and then between Halbarad and Aragorn. I felt it was very realistic how people would argue. That is horrible for the people of Windthale, and poor Aragorn, I want to give him a hug! I loved seeing your Elrohi and Elladan. I love how you write them. I also love how you portray Aragorn angry. I think you do it in a way that is still true to the character. I've gained a whole new appreciation for Halbarad and Aragorn's friendship after reading your stories. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this chapter! And no worries about lateness... I'm just glad you found some time to enjoy getting caught up. I'm especially glad that this story is helping you gain a greater appreciation of Halbarad and Aragorn's friendship...I do think that's one of the more neglected relationships in the fandom and I'm glad to do my part to help fill that niche. And for me, characterization is everything, so it's also nice to hear you feel I've captured all the men (and half-Elves!) in a true light. Thanks for the review! |