Michelle04/27/11 09:08 pm1: Chapter 1Signed

LOL! Gandalf probably shouldn't promise things he can't influenced at all times:)

I really liked your description of the rain. I've walked through rain like that and it's terribly annoying. I think you captured that in a very detailed and atmospheric manner.

Author's Response:

I've walked through such rain too, so it wasn't too hard to describe :) Thanks!

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