| Okay, there are two things I particularly like here. Maybe even three: First, you're keeping the reader on his toes, never quite letting him in on the secret, keeping him interesting. Two, I like the fact that you're showing what comes after the battle and after saving one's life. That slow and long road of recovery is so rarely shown in fanfic (if only I knew why). And lastly, I like that you show Aragorn's weakness (for lack of a better word). |
