Michelle01/07/08 08:47 pm1: Chapter 1Signed

Wow, Asfaloth is quite the diva - it's most amusing! I cannot help but wonder whether he staged the whole thing just for his own amusement!

The merry chase through the woods was fun. Everybody was chasing everyone else and in the end the ended up together around a fire. 

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Michelle!  Yes, who knew Glorfindel's horse was like that?  I certainly didn't when I started writing the story. :)  I had a lot of fun writing the story, it was the first time I'd written anything from Legolas's POV or from the hobbits' POV and doing a challenge made it interesting.  Thanks again!

Amarok01/07/08 07:52 pm1: Chapter 1Signed
I enjoyed this story a lot. Especially the reason how Asfaloth came free in the first place, and how you led the reader up to that :-). And also nice was the scene where Aragorn offers Legolas his already worn clothes... grin...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!  I did lead the reader on for a bit there, didn't I? But, I couldn't give it away too early and I needed to have that confession and then I needed to have a naked elf to fit the challenge requirements and having Aragorn offer Legolas his worn clothes was just too hard to resist. :)

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