Mairi10/08/07 07:29 pm3: Chapter 3Anonymous
It would make the writing flow better if you were to rewrite the beginnings and ends of the chapters, but good anyhow.

Mairi10/07/07 07:14 pm2: Chapter 2Anonymous
Ah. Would this be evil Denethor? I've seen fatherly Denethor, crazy Denethor, evil Denethor... Fascinating person. Nice writing!

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