Really good story - I thought that all the characters were very realistic, and I loe the way you write thoughts. Just one thing - this is posted with the second chapter before the first??? Great story anyway!
Author's Response: Thank you. Good characterizations are very important to the success of any story, as is the way a character thinks. I'm very pleased that you liked the way I did both. :o)
I don't know why Ch. Two is listed first. I certainly didn't post it that way. Also your review came up twice. Soemthing must be wrong with the site.
Thanks so much for reading. |
