| Mairi | 11/14/07 07:03 pm | 2: 2. Traitor | Anonymous |
| Very nice chapter. One of the good things about it was the length- not too long, not too short. Good description, as well. |
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| Mairi | 11/13/07 06:54 pm | 1: 1. Towards the Elostirion | Anonymous |
| This was highly enjoyable to read, and you have a story well under way in the first chapter. Very nice work! |
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