| Mairi | 11/23/07 03:04 pm | 2: 2. The Punishment | Anonymous |
| Oh, how unpleasant. That's a good thing, as I don't think it was meant to be an overly cheery chapter. Nice writing. |
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| Mairi | 11/22/07 04:11 pm | 1: 1. The Accusation | Anonymous |
| I liked the writing style here. It was very nice, particularly in the first paragraph. I think there may be a few typos, though. |
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