Ok, I can see what you speak of. And for that, I'll give you a better mark. It may have gone better if you had made clearer why it was so short. I have no clue what the contest or whatever was, so I was in the dark. I suppose using Hope to much does get very tiresome for some people. Me? If used correctly, not at all. But aye, you did well for your limitations. Sorry about the previous review.

Elemmírë 

I would of liked this to be longer. The idea is cute, but to short to really do much good. It's like a really long summary. I liked the end, "And he sat down, his new treasure strewn about him, pouring over a riddle he could never hope to solve." In fact, just now as I write this, I think you could of pulled out his name (Hope) and show that even his title didn't count for all of his life. Just a thought, don't flame the reviewer! It wasn't bad, just could of been better.

Elemmire