| Michelle | 04/23/07 09:17 pm | 6: 6. The first day of your death | Signed |
Ohhhhh, heavy foreshadowing! From what we've seen so far of Dagnir, I think he's really jumped the gun and gone crazy. And I *still* want to know how he managed to survive that fall - but he guess he'll tell Aragorn all about as soon as he has him in his grasp (those badasses always are a talkative bunch). I really love the interaction between Aragorn, Legolas and the twins. They are so terribly amusing, I can't wipe the silly smile off my face. Though, I fear from this point on it'll only get angstier and we'll leave the easy banter behind. Still, not good that they're going to part ways now. If I remember correctly it takes awhile for the poison to work. Aragorn will be all alone... whereever *wails*! |
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| Michelle | 04/23/07 09:05 pm | 5: 5. One last night | Signed |
Ha! And now let's see whether this truly does not affect elves... Bon appetit!
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| Michelle | 04/23/07 08:05 pm | 1: 1. The wait is over | Signed |
Oh, I love the build-up! And poison? That's always good - I mean not good. It depends on the perspective, I guess. I really thought Dagnir would kill the poor guy, but on the other hand. The elves will need something to name the poison and manifacture an antidote. Mhm... This is already shaping up nicely, and I only read the first chapter:) |
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| Tardolien | 07/19/06 09:39 pm | 33: 33. Nobody said it was easy | Anonymous |
Oh no! Why do you done this to me? End on this part of the story! You like to torment me? The same way, you do with the twins and Estel?
I am verry interisted, how do you get these things in the right way! Help them, bevor it is to late, please! Tardo
Author's Response: Well, lets simply say readers say I have a mean/evil side that shows itself from time to time. ;) The next chapter should be out soon, hope you like it. |
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