Ha-ha, terrified Aragorn! :) Nicely done. :)

I wasn't in panic on my wedding (in fact, I was relatively relaxed), but I have to admit that I don't remember much of what the registrar was talking about - I was a little nervous in those particular moments! :)

He-he, this reminds me of situations in comedy-movies. :) Nicely done.

I liked this story very much. You managed to write a solid criminal story into the universe and worked out the characters well. I read most of your other stories and delight in your account of the relationship of Aragorn and Faramir, not the least in the angsty stories. So I wish for more stories of how it was like for them before they became friends, just like you did here (maybe a bit more angsty *g*) Thank you for writing!

You captured me with the first lines of the story.

I mean how could Eldarion not like Faramir...? grin

Gladly that it work out in the end.

Thank you for writing it, i enjoyed reading it.

*Hugs & Kisses*

Have a great week and keep smiling,

Sivan

So, we came to the end. Thank you for this wonderful journey. It's a great story with wonderful, plausible OCs, and Sulion is great. You did a fantastic job with this, Linda.

I love the parts describing Sulion's vanity. *giggles*

Btw, I have a feeling that the ladies might finally realize his true nature...

Aww, the kittens! *melts* When I read this:

“Do not disturb the kittens, mellon nîn,”

I laughed a lot, but a moment later, when I read Elbeth's letter, I started laughing so much that Alen looked at me with a what-on-earth-happened-to-you expression on his face. Now I laugh again when I think about it! :) She saw kittens and foal being born, but she thinks she doesn't know enough to deliver a baby. *lol* Perfect, my dear! Absolutely perfect!!!

Yay! :) Looks like Arwen is finally starting to see things the way they really are. I can't wait to read what happens next. ;)

My first thought was that it was some sort of allergy. But now I am not sure any more, especially as you mention a connection to Dies Irae. Ok, we'll see what happens next...

Oh! I have to say that the end completely surprised me!

<I>"Really?" Aragorn could not hide the scepticism in his voice.
"Well, your line has a Maia for an ancestress," Faramir reminded him.</I>

*lol* Perfect detail! *giggles*

Oh, I am *sure* that Faramir and Aragorn are wrong. :) I have a feeling that the visit of those new dragons will turn out into a pleasant surprise.

First, a typo. ;) "I thought if I knew the simple phases..." and "...and Faramir also mastered a few phases..." I believe you mean "phrases".

Second, the chapter text is doubled. That probably happened because of troubles with the browser that you had mentioned before. Maybe Michele can fix it, if your browser doesn't listen to you?

And last, but not least, I love this! I am so happy Fu Nung is getting better. :) I can't wait to see when they will be finally able to have a real talk. :) And also, I can't wait to see the new meeting between Sulion and Arwen and Eowyn!

Oh. :(

But I am still hoping that Fu Nung will somehow survive, that some cure will be found...

Beautiful story.  I absolutely loved it! Healing is a difficult process, but I think you described it well.

Oh, poor Sulion. :( The end is so sad. :(

You made things really complicated. Now I am very curious to see how you'll solve things with Arwen and how she'll see the true Sulion's nature.