| Traylen | 07/27/07 02:46 am | 1: One | Signed |
| Nice story. I like the helpless understanding you have going on between Aragorn and Legolas. He gets it but he doesn't want to. The way you placed The End works very well. Love it! |
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| jessica | 10/29/05 01:15 pm | 1: One | Anonymous |
sad , it mad me cry realy it did . it was a great story one of the best ones i'v read . but it was sad
Author's Response: Jessica, I thank- you for your comments. I know i made it on the dark side, but there is some hope, as I have said to others this is FF and strange things happen in this word |
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| Thorongirl | 10/25/05 06:14 pm | 1: One | Anonymous |
Cruel, cruel, cruel, cruel. Do I make myself clear? That was CRUEL. But, this is, after all, the marvelous world of fanfiction! So I'm guessing that despite that 'The End' finality to it, that there will be yet another part. Legolas' 'death' is too abrupt, too unexpected, too cruel. (Did I already mention that)? Hey, AussieRo, very exciting story here, lots of action, much angstiness. You still have some issues with punctuation and sentence structure at times. (For example, there are some sentences that are what I would call 'run-on sentences' that need to be broken up into smaller sentences and you're a little shaky on your use of apostrophes). But, as I said, the story itself -- the plot -- is well done and very exciting. Good pace. Thanks for sharing with us.
Author's Response: Yes Viggomanic, you make yourself very clear (6 times). You are trying to tell me that i am cruel, wicked and evil for what I did to our fav Elf.(hehehehehe). Evil me likes to come out sometimes to play. Again thank-you for takng the time to read this story and for leaving your thoughts on it Yes in time there will be a follow up, this is after all FF and amazing things do happen |
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| Michelle | 10/17/05 12:38 am | 1: One | Signed |
What did you do *wails*!! You killed our favourite elf *wails some more*! That was very evil, indeed. The whole story was very dark, the only respite we got was the little nursing scene with Arwen and Eowyn. Apart from that: dark times ahead. And the worst thing, the evil Haradrim shaman has won. He's killed Legolas and is now super-shaman (or whatever). Will those evil corsairs and Haradrim ever pay? Will there be a third part where Elessar causes a bloodbath in Harad? I'm shocked. Especially when reading this story back to back with "A little Ray of Hope" - the stories are *so* different *sobs*. You amaze me!
Author's Response: Now now Michelle take a deep breath and calm down. Everyting will be alright (I think). And who says the evil shaman has won? Stranger things have happened. Yes there will be a third part.But just not yet. My Oct teitho still needs work and I must admit to being a little drained. When my get up and go comes back I'll start work on prt3 but until then hold on. This is FF and strange things are known to happen in this genre. Thank- you for taking the time to read and review this one, and i also thank-you for the compliment. Ro |
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