| Mairi | 09/10/07 08:45 pm | 6: Chapter Six | Anonymous |
Could Elladan do a little less thinking, please? It slows down the action. Besides that, this was one of the best chapters. |
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| Mairi | 09/07/07 10:29 pm | 5: Chapter Five | Anonymous |
| If this review comes out oddly I apologize, my computer isn't behaving... Anyhow, still reading. Nice. |
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| Mairi | 09/06/07 09:08 pm | 4: Chapter Four | Anonymous |
Nice. Good writing in this chapter. There was a grammatical error at the top of the page, but I can't remember what it was. Oh, well. |
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| Mairi | 09/05/07 09:07 pm | 3: Chapter Three | Anonymous |
I meant to mention this before, but I was being stupid and forgot- nice job switching perspectives.
Author's Response: Thanks. I am glad to see that the story has held your interest and you've continued reading. |
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| Mairi | 09/04/07 09:00 pm | 2: Chapter Two | Anonymous |
I kept reading it (hence, I'm reviewing the next chapter) and I'm impressed. It's so nice when stories get better as they go.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you think the story improved as it went on. I would hate to disappoint a reader. I'm glad you continued with it. Thanks for reviewing. |
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| Mairi | 09/03/07 10:45 pm | 1: Chapter One | Anonymous |
| Estel running off, is, of course, a very common plotline, but hey, as long as it's well written, who cares? Nice. |
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