Naice a Nilme :: Tales of Aragorn and Legolas

Tari Surion	01/29/08 10:14 pm	6: Gentle Reassurance	Anonymous
I thought this was a great story. I love the way you write. Little Aragorn is so cute. I like the drama & the friendship in this story. It's absolutely wonderful.

Eleiel

10/27/06 04:13 am

6: Gentle Reassurance

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Beautiful. It is easy to see from your writing the Aragorn and Legolas from the Lord of the Rings.

Just one little thing though, Legolas called Elrohir Elrondion, i think it would be more likely the would call him Peredhelion; Son of the Half-Elven. but that in an unimportant thing. You are definatly one of my favorite authors.

Eleiel

Not all that is Gold does not Glitter

Author's Response:
thankyou *blush*
It's probably just me but if I have the twins addressed by the 'half elven' name they get called Peredhel too, not peredhelion. Elrond's parents were both half elven not one an elf and the other human so that's where my reasoning for that comes from.
I have Legolas address them like that because the way I write him he can't actually tell the difference between them *giggle* so he falls back on formality when he needs to address one of them *grin* like how Haldir calls him Thranduilion in Loth Lorien

Eleiel

10/27/06 04:03 am

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It is spot on, do you get nothing wrong? Once again lovely story telling and acurate facts.

However, I though the elvish word "pen", meant "name". I named a sword I designed "Pennass Maegil" the Nameless Sword. ;)

Eleiel

Author's Response:
hehe, I'm sure I get plenty wrong *smile* but I try to stick as closely to the stories as I can
In Sindarin 'pen' exists twice; 1 is a means without, lacking, -less; 2 is the third person pronoun one.

Eleiel	10/27/06 03:49 am	4: Wavering Respite	Signed
impressive, most impressive! this is by far some of the most Tolkienesque fanfiction I have ever had the honor to read. 'tis very enjoyable. Author's Response: blush* thankyou*

Eleiel	10/27/06 03:42 am	3: Dark Premonitions	Signed
Awww! he is just like my little sister!:) except she's only 3. My thanks for yet another chapter very well done! Author's Response: thanks grin but I hope your little sister isn't having dreams that are premonitions like that smile

Eleiel

10/27/06 03:38 am

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good, very good. more royal, resposible Legolas. that is how Orland Bloom should have portrayed him! spectacular!

I also like how you did the twins, and their hatered of ork and the like. i always imagined them as having sort of the bloodwrath, after they resured thier mother.

Author's Response:
Thankyou *grin* glad you like it
The twins hate orcs but at this point they're not lost to it like they were after their mother sailed *smile* I love writing them, they're fascinatingly complex.

Eleiel	10/27/06 03:27 am	1: Canine Encounter	Signed
hmm, I like how you have portrayed legolas, ecpecialy in such a short time. This shows his reposibility more most other stories. I like it very Much! Author's Response: thankyou grin* it's how I see him.*

Elfinabottle	11/13/05 11:07 am	6: Gentle Reassurance	Anonymous
I thought this was a great story. I love the way you write. I like that you started the connection between Legolas and Estel when he was so young. To me, it makes their closeness in later years more believable. Author's Response: blush* thankyou*

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