A lovely story, and well-read on the whole. The music added a lot to the reading, the extra time it must have taken to add it, was well spent.
If I were to offer one advice, though, it would be to slow down a little bit. Not much, but at times I had trouble following. It is much harder to understand when I can't see the speaker, and even LR reading tend to come out a little too stressed. It is not a big problem, but it is something that can be improved. |