You know how I like hints of humor; I giggled at "she would faint" and "they would devour her before she even had a chance to open her mouth". :)
And I bet that she really was surprised in the end and that she didn't completely understand what was going on. :) But she'll discover it one day. :)
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm delighted you enjoyed this ficlet. I like to add bits of humour!She will indeed find out! | 