I've always had a soft spot for Ioreth - even though I'm certain she would drive me mad if I ever chanced to meet her:)
I think that you captured her rambling persona quite well - especially by making this (nominally) a conversation between herself and her cousin when in fact only Ioreth is speaking. That basically nails her chatty self!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you believe I captured her "voice" and character correctly. I appreciate your taking the time to read and review. Thanks again. | 