Hi,
I liked your story and I think the title isn't so bad. It is well written and has some nice turns. Throwing the acorns was fun and the frightended ashes were a nice idea. But I don't think the story belongs to drama it is more about friendship. I do hope you will write more in the future.
Author's Response: You´re right, it doesn´t belong to drama, but there is no friendship genre to put it in and drama seemed to be the best second choice. Thank you for reviewing, I´m glad you liked my story! :) I am always writing, but I don´t always finish my stories... but I´ll defenitely upload more of them :) |
