What a wonderful story! There are so many things to like here: how you blended the happenings in ME with Earendil's past, grouping them thematically together and by that drawing new and interesting connections. And by that you're also portraying time as a mythical circle, because everything is connected in a way and decisions you made in the past will have an effect in the future.
Your best story to date, I think!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you could see the idea of the cyclic time in the story, because that's one thing that I find fascinating not only in Tolkien's world, but also in reality. Thank you very much for the review! | 