| Ellynn | 04/23/12 09:35 pm | 22: For ye shall go out with joy. | Signed |
So, we came to the end. Thank you for this wonderful journey. It's a great story with wonderful, plausible OCs, and Sulion is great. You did a fantastic job with this, Linda.
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review and all your support for this story and the artwork. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this so much! |
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| Ellynn | 02/13/12 03:56 pm | 21: Unto us a child is born | Signed |
I love the parts describing Sulion's vanity. *giggles*
Btw, I have a feeling that the ladies might finally realize his true nature...
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you enjoyed Sulion being vain. Let us hope the ladies finally realise he is a good, albeit vain dragon! |
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| Ellynn | 01/13/12 06:58 pm | 20: Needs go that the devil drives | Signed |
Aww, the kittens! *melts* When I read this:
“Do not disturb the kittens, mellon nîn,”
I laughed a lot, but a moment later, when I read Elbeth's letter, I started laughing so much that Alen looked at me with a what-on-earth-happened-to-you expression on his face. Now I laugh again when I think about it! :) She saw kittens and foal being born, but she thinks she doesn't know enough to deliver a baby. *lol* Perfect, my dear! Absolutely perfect!!!
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you liked the kittens, which were inspired by Rachel's art work. I'm so pleased the chapter made you laugh. |
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| Ellynn | 12/24/11 06:24 pm | 19: Those whom God hath joined together | Signed |
Yay! :) Looks like Arwen is finally starting to see things the way they really are. I can't wait to read what happens next. ;)
Author's Response: Yes, Arwen is finally softening but the story isn't over yet. Many thanks for reviewing. |
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| Ellynn | 09/29/11 10:08 am | 17: The curse is come upon me | Signed |
My first thought was that it was some sort of allergy. But now I am not sure any more, especially as you mention a connection to Dies Irae. Ok, we'll see what happens next...
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.No, it isn't an allergy wrong with Farawyn, but the remedy is very different than in Dies irae. |
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| Ellynn | 08/15/11 12:15 am | 16: Uneasy lies the head that wears a crown | Signed |
Oh! I have to say that the end completely surprised me!
<I>"Really?" Aragorn could not hide the scepticism in his voice.
"Well, your line has a Maia for an ancestress," Faramir reminded him.</I>
*lol* Perfect detail! *giggles*
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased I still manage to surprise you and make you laugh. |
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| Ellynn | 07/04/11 01:02 pm | 15: Betrayed, betrayed! | Signed |
Oh, I am *sure* that Faramir and Aragorn are wrong. :) I have a feeling that the visit of those new dragons will turn out into a pleasant surprise.
Author's Response: All will soon be revealed! Many thanks for your much appreciated review. |
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| Ellynn | 06/19/11 01:49 pm | 14: To perceive the words of understanding | Signed |
First, a typo. ;) "I thought if I knew the simple phases..." and "...and Faramir also mastered a few phases..." I believe you mean "phrases".
Second, the chapter text is doubled. That probably happened because of troubles with the browser that you had mentioned before. Maybe Michele can fix it, if your browser doesn't listen to you?
And last, but not least, I love this! I am so happy Fu Nung is getting better. :) I can't wait to see when they will be finally able to have a real talk. :) And also, I can't wait to see the new meeting between Sulion and Arwen and Eowyn!
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review and for pointing out the errors, which I've fixed. This chapter seems jinxed as Ialmost lost the last third and Aragorn's Chinese is bad enough to scare people who understand it!
I'm pleased you enjoyed the chapter. There is still lots of angst in store for our heroes. |
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| Ellynn | 04/24/11 11:33 pm | 12: Swimming in the river | Signed |
Oh. :(
But I am still hoping that Fu Nung will somehow survive, that some cure will be found...
Author's Response: All will be revealed whether he lives or dies in the next chapter. Many thanks for your review. |
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| Ellynn | 03/05/11 12:03 am | 11: Let not the sun go down upon your wrath | Signed |
Oh, poor Sulion. :( The end is so sad. :(
You made things really complicated. Now I am very curious to see how you'll solve things with Arwen and how she'll see the true Sulion's nature.
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm so pleased you enjoyed this chapter.I fear things will get worse before they get better! |
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| Ellynn | 01/26/11 10:12 am | 10: The heart and stomach of a king | Signed |
Thank you, dear friend! *hugs* I like the chapter (edited or not), and I am very much looking forward to the moment when the rider will wake up. What a talk between him and Aragorn it will be!
In the meantime, it would be nice to see the meeting between Sulion and Arwen. :) |
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| Ellynn | 01/15/11 12:09 am | 9: Do you not fear this wild and furious woman? | Signed |
Wonderful chapter! I am sure Arwen will see the thruth soon. And now I can't wait to see what happens next! Seems like the bundle is important. *impatient* *curious*
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm so pleased you enjoyed this chapter.All will be revealed about the bundle in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm so pleased you enjoyed this chapter.All will be revealed about the bundle in the next chapter! |
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| Ellynn | 11/07/10 11:34 pm | 7: The righteous are bold as a lion | Signed |
This is really becoming more and more complicated. I hope that people will soon realize the truth.
Great and tense chapter, especially towards the end. Update soon, please!
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I promise you that the story will get more complicated yet! I'm pleased that you enjoyed this chapter. |
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| Ellynn | 10/22/10 11:20 pm | 6: Steeped to the lips in misery | Signed |
Yay, finally an update! :)
I love this chapter. I can very easily imagine Tarostar and his prejudices; no wonder Aragorn lost his patience in the beginning. I also like very much that you introduced a healer from Rohan. And yes, I like the humoristic moment about dragon and entire supply of poppy juice. :p
I hope we won't wait long for another chapter. *sweet puppy look*
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review .I'm pleased you are enjoying the story and liked the touches of humour in this chapter. The next one is already drafted and knowing you want to read it will help motivate me to get it polished. |
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| Ellynn | 09/08/10 06:52 pm | 5: An unwelcome guest | Signed |
I read this story "in one breath", as we say in Croatian. And now I can't wait for more! I like your background story about origin of dragons and that they are not evil, but that some were corrupted by Morgoth. I hope the people of Gondor will learn that soon.
I hope you'll update soon. :)
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you are enjoying my story. The background for the dragons for a good idea of Raksha's. I like your "one breath" expression. I have all the story drafted out so hope to post more soon. |
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