Tanis03/03/13 10:55 pm1: Chapter 1Signed
I'm baaaaaack! Though only for a short while this time. Duty calls and I'm sneaking in a few seconds of pleasure.

I'm so glad you were on the Feb story voting or I might never have found you! And what a loss that would have been. I love this little encapsulated *history* of Aragorn from from his first squawks to the accession.

Great compare and contrast between his life and that of Denethor, whose place he might rightfully have accepted and saved himself long years of hardship and privation. You made me wonder, had their roles been switched, would the Denethor I know from the books and the movies have made a different choice from the one Aragorn made in that moment?

And the poignancy of repeating his father's mistakes on Denethor's part is so very subtly done! I think that's what I love most about your story telling - it's all there, but never glaringly stated. You tell us lots of things in a look or a glance, or gesture, and sometimes a setting, with very few extraneous words. As in this story - Denethor screwed up with his own sons too.

Sighhhhhhhh ... the dryer buzzer is going off. I must leave you again! But I'll be back!

:)

Michelle12/29/08 09:39 pm1: Chapter 1Signed

Wow, marvellous! I'm right glad Cal spotted this story and recced it. I do tend to browse the recent list there, but it's a real bother to seperate the good from the bad and the ugly:)

This was one finely crafted tale, mirroring these two characters and showing certain points in their lives. I think I liked the "leavetaking" part best - Aragorn saying goodbye to Gondor while Denethor buries his father. It's a very poignant scene and of course it's also the focal point of the story because of the changed POV.

And then there's the little bit with ranger!Aragorn in a tavern and I've never been able to resist that image *sigh*. It's probably the fangirl in me.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

A couple people have mentioned liking the bit with Strider in the tavern, which is ironic because I almost cut that part.  I didn't have a good equivalent scene for Denethor.  In the end though, I liked the image too much to give it up (we can be fangirls together ;-) )

I've been working on some ideas for multi-chapter fics using these characters, so it's good to know that you enjoyed my interpretation of them.

cheers!

-Brennan


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