| Anonymous | 10/26/07 08:50 pm | 5: Light in Dark Places | Anonymous |
| All right, I really, really, really enjoyed the imagery in this chapter. And all the half-sentences- great! |
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| Mairi | 10/25/07 10:10 pm | 4: A Shadow Has Fallen | Anonymous |
| When you were typing this up, you left the word "a" out a few times. But still lovely, lovely writing. |
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| Mairi | 10/24/07 10:00 pm | 3: Past, Present, Future | Anonymous |
| I love the way you write Thranduil- not completely good or bad in a very believable way. |
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| Mairi | 10/23/07 10:15 pm | 2: Assurance and Despair | Anonymous |
| Like I said, flashbacks done that way bug me. However, I loved this chapter. Very good writing. |
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| Mairi | 10/22/07 11:26 pm | 1: Alone | Anonymous |
| Is there any way you could make it clear it's a flashback without writing it out? I dislike that, but very nice otherwise. |
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