i understand why you felt the need to rework the story and i appreciate that the group of them will now flow more evenely. but i kind of wish that the first one didn't need to leave us. you are a marvelous storyteller and you have succeeded in keeping most of the original idea and still fitting into the universe as it expanded itself, good work.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words,which are much appreciated. You can still read the old version here http://shadowandthoughtold.blogspot.com/ | 