I really enjoyed the charcterizations of Estel, Legolas, and Glorfindel in this story. They were different than usually depicted in fanfiction. I was feeling sorrier for Glorfindel than the other two; he must have lost a bet with Elrond or something, to be stuck taking them to Lorien with him! :D Glorfy's whip made me chuckle, and I guess that cave troll won't be gawking out through any rock holes in future. The pacing is good, and the dialog flows well. I want to see what happens when they get to Lorien, as I'm sure Galadriel won't put up with any nonsense!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know that you are enjoying this story. I think you will find Glorfindel's plight very interesting - I wanted to depict him in a little more depth than that which he is afforded in the book. And you will definitely end up feeling sorry for him as he is a tragic hero and slightly flawed character here. I love writing Estel & Legolas - I think the way their relationship was portrayed in the movies spoke of some 'history' between them, so my stories are really an extrapolation of that. I'm sure you will enjoy the Lorien scenes, but in the meantime, there is plenty more angst and drama to come! |