I actually read this about a month ago when I was home sick, and there still hasn't been an update! PLEASE UPDATE! I'm dyyyying! Quick question: are you on fanfiction dot net? I searched and couldn't find you. You seem to have great control over the English language: your words flow brilliantly. But you also seem to be having some trouble with paragraphing and grammar during speech. If you want a beta reader, I could do that, but my most pressing concern is PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ELF AND RANGER UPDATE!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and sorry it took me so long to respond to it. I will do my best to update as soon as I can!!! I haven't posted anything on fanfiction - another thing I have to get around to doing (as you may have guessed, organisation is not one of my strongest points). I'm not entirely sure how this beta-thingummy works, but it would be wonderful to have somebody checking the grammer etc. Thanks again for the review - I'm really glad you're liking it | 