| Eleiel | 11/04/07 04:23 pm | 11: Chapter 11 - I Know of Your Orders | Signed |
How terrable! the poor girls. A good title for this might be 'The Price of Death', or something like that.
Author's Response: I'm just going to reply to this one but i'll put in my answers to the others as well. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the suggestion for a title but i just wanna know how you came up with 'The Price of Death', it's a good title and i'll consider using it. You don't have to review again with your answer, just email me on ezzarox4323@hotmail.com. Thanks for reviewing - Ro'sGirl |
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| Eleiel | 11/04/07 04:17 pm | 10: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings | Signed |
| Ohhh, the suspence deepens!! not ver elvish names however, and it might be a good idea to get a beta, some of these sentences are a bit hard to read. |
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| Eleiel | 11/04/07 04:04 pm | 7: Chapter 7 - Antidotes | Signed |
This chapter is good too, or at least the idea is good. I was thinking actually that you could take out this chapter (it really has nothing to do with the story) and made into its own story, a short vignette you know? Other than that, I love the way the story is unfolding, good job! |
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| Eleiel | 11/04/07 03:53 pm | 5: Chapter 5 - An Explanation | Signed |
| actually I like this chapter better that all the other, it makes more sense somehow. Maybe it isless complicated than the others? I'll get back to you on that. lol |
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| Eleiel | 11/04/07 03:45 pm | 1: Chapter 1 - Missing | Signed |
| Hahaha! I liked that Letter, it made me laugh! |
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