| Mairi | 10/08/07 07:29 pm | 3: Chapter 3 | Anonymous |
| It would make the writing flow better if you were to rewrite the beginnings and ends of the chapters, but good anyhow. |
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| Mairi | 10/07/07 07:14 pm | 2: Chapter 2 | Anonymous |
| Ah. Would this be evil Denethor? I've seen fatherly Denethor, crazy Denethor, evil Denethor... Fascinating person. Nice writing! |
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