This is lovely! As I commented with your other story, you give such depth to the characters, with this one, you give us some insight into what it's like to be the Sons of Elrond. I've always wondered what their choice was in the end--did they sail to the West, or did they make the same choice as Arwen? Here, in this story, you let us see some of the thought that guides them to their final choice.

 The conversation between Estel and Elrohir is very well done--you portray their emotions marvelously, and your dialogue is excellent. I hope to read more of your work in the future. It was pleasure to read it!

 kestrels, aka Annette at agriessman@insightbb.com