What a wonderful story you have going! I raced through all 8 chapters this afternoon, although I kept telling myself, "Slow down, slow down!" But I couldn't--I had to know if Estel made it to Lorien, and of course, I'm glad he did. But what of this imposter at Imladris?? How disgustingly evil he is, with his ruse. Scary version of Elrond, definitely. I like your version of Estel . . . young, innocent, easily fooled. I can believe that of him, thanks to the way you've written him as someone who's been very sheltered and as yet untested. I also liked that you have Haldir doing the "rescue", and loved the orc battle. Ow. Poor Estel's having a hard time in your hands, but it's great for us readers. I hope to see more of interaction between Haldir and Estel in the rest of the story. Hope you get around to updating it eventually. I'd hate to think I'll never get to see how it all ends!
Author's Response: I didn't realize I never replied to this. My bad... I hope to update it *soon!* I'm still stuck at the battle scene... ~Cal |