Wonderful! I have to say, I think I like the first chapter best. Already the first chapter puts you in the right mood - a bit somber, but still beautiful. And then you have your dream team Aragorn/Halbarad. I can never tell you enough how much I like your Halbarad. He's something of an older brother - always mentally shaking his head at Aragorn's antics it seems, but still loyal to a fault. And I like the idea of putting Arwen into this as a little surprise for Aragorn. He's dancing around her like he's fourteen - it's really endearing to see and you would wish he'd just grow a pair:) I love her last sentence to Aragorn, that was pure poetry. Sounded very "Elvish" in my opinion. But what about those coupling festivities? Inquiring minds want to know *evil grin*?!
Author's Response: haha. *g* I always had that *Arwen meets the rangers* idea in my head, but never had the energy to actually write the story (angst, love, romance, humour, the great differences between the life of the rangers and Arwen's life...). I am glad you liked this story. And the coupling festivities...I just could not find the right word and the dealine was nearing....*g* |
