Hi! I can't name all things about this chapter I liked, it would be almost as long as the chapter self. It was very well written again and I liked the mood you created, very relaxed and funny in some ways ( Beorns change and the puppy spoiling Aragorn's shirt). I liked you're description of Gandalfs and Aragorns relationship, they sound so familiar. I'm a bit sad that it's coming to an end, but I enjoyed it still. I think only the epilogue is missing. Looking forward to it.
Author's Response: Thank you, babschwi! So glad you liked this chapter and all its lighter moments... I definitely wanted it to have a more relaxed feel as we've finally reached the end of all the crises--Aragorn's healing, Durvain's healing, and now it's time for a peaceful interlude for all of them. And yes, there's an epilogue coming, and a "missing scene" that's a one-shot I'll post as an appendix after the epilogue. And then I'll move on to writing a different story... what that one will be yet I'm not sure, as I have several works-in-process I need to finish.
Thanks again for all the reviews you've left--they've been very encouraging! |
