Michelle | 02/24/11 11:21 pm | 5: Chapter 5 - Tuck Your Head Under | Signed |
Reading that chapter reminded me of something. Wasn't it you who came up with those ranger-specific proverbs and sayings? I can't find the story in question, but I *think* it was you. Because you're doing it again here whenever you let one of the eagles speak. That's very original and an absolute joy to read!
Author's Response: Hmm, I might have come up with a few... right now my brain isn't cooperating and I can barely remember what stories I've written let alone if I put proverbs in them. LOL I'm terrible about not remembering details about my own stories--I always have to refer back to them when I'm writing new ones. But it's highly likely I tossed a few in for "flavor", especially with Halbarad, because I do think that everyone, even Rangers and Kings and Eagles, uses idioms of one kind or another and writing those kinds of things into dialogue helps it flow in a way that sounds real and natural and helps the reader connect better with the characters. I know I had Ferdinand Took using a few hobbity ones in "The Ranger and the Hobbit". I'm glad you enjoyed the ones I made up for my Eagles. It was a lot of fun to think about how Eagles might express themselves in that way. :) |
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babschwi | 01/18/11 01:09 am | 5: Chapter 5 - Tuck Your Head Under | Anonymous |
Hi, I almost forgot to review. Thank you again for the 5th chapter. I liked Durvain very much, but the chapter imo had not enough Aragorn in it and to much Gandalf fretting. And today is monday - so I'm waiting for an update - please, please, please....
Author's Response: Thanks, babschwi... sorry that one didn't have enough Aragorn for you--this is, though, a story about Gandalf too, and as Aragorn was a bit out of it, he couldn't contribute as much. And you can hardly blame poor Gandalf for fretting. It can't be easy, trying to keep a king alive. :) But the next chapter should more than satisfy you--it will go up on Tuesday this week, however, because of maintenance/server moves on this website. I thought it best to be safe and not post the chapter while all that was going on. But tomorrow morning it should be up and ready for you to read. |
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Etain | 01/16/11 08:31 pm | 5: Chapter 5 - Tuck Your Head Under | Anonymous |
Wow, I don't check this website for about a week and there are two new chapters! :D
Still a great story, really! I love these two eagles! Poor them, loosing Belechen =( I really felt sorry for them...
Please keep your good work up!
Author's Response: Thank you, Etain! And yeah, I'm updating on Mondays and Thursdays, so 2 chapters a week. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and glad the Eagles' sad story stirred your sympathies!
New chapter up on Monday. :) |
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