Michelle02/24/11 12:06 am1: Chapter 1 - "Elbereth... hear me... help me..." Signed

*salutes* Here I am to finally tackle this story. I've always liked to see both Aragorn and Gandalf in fanfic - I really like the interaction between the two - and I expect to see much of that here *winks*. I found starting off with Gandalf's POV really interesting - you rarely get a chance to see into his head. So that was a treat.

And now let's see whether he can get Aragorn upright again. Or rather, let's see how many chapters he'll need for that endeavor!



Author's Response:

*salutes back*  Hi there! *g*   I figured you'd start reading this at some point, now that it's complete.  I'm glad you like the start of it, in Gandalf's POV.  It's not a spoiler really to say that the first 5 chapters are from his POV and the last five and epilogue from Aragorn's.  It was fun to jump into Gandalf's head for a change... he's a fascinating character and I've always loved the friendship he and Aragorn had.

As for how many chapters to get Aragorn upright... telling that at this point WOULD be a spoiler. *g*   Hope you enjoy the ride!


Etain01/06/11 05:01 pm1: Chapter 1 - "Elbereth... hear me... help me..." Anonymous

Wow... great story so far! I'm most eager to read the next chapter =)

The end of this chapter made me laugh out loud... a dragon hoard full of mithril^^

Really great story! Thanks for giving us that to read =)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Etain!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this, and took the time to leave a review.  Gandalf is none too pleased with his slow wits at the end of the chapter, is he.  But I think, given all he's had to deal with, he has good reason to be a little late in recognizing the boon about to land on his doorstep. :) 

Again, thanks for the review, and I hope you continue enjoying the story.


babschwi01/05/11 12:49 pm1: Chapter 1 - "Elbereth... hear me... help me..." Anonymous

Hi, thank you so much for the second chapter. I like the humor in it ( esp. orc repellent, punctured companions) and the gentle care from Gandalf to Aragorn. And I am really curious what happend to Aragorn and I hope, he will be well again.



Author's Response:

Thank you, babschwi!  So glad you liked this chapter and the humor in it... that orc repellent is actually Halbarad's horse balm, which showed up in my story "At Hope's Edge"... it's horrible smelling but works very well on sore muscles on men as well as horses.  It's just too bad Gandalf doesn't know that!   Another chapter coming tomorrow!  Thanks again for the review. :)


babschwi12/31/10 12:31 am1: Chapter 1 - "Elbereth... hear me... help me..." Anonymous

this is fantastic!! great start, i liked every minute of it, please continue soon



Author's Response:

Thank you, babschwi!  I'm so glad you liked this... and it will continue with the next chapter on Monday, if all goes well.  I'll be posting 2 chapters a week until all 10 and the epilogue are up.  Thanks for the review!


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