Striderette911/07/10 02:46 am13: Chapter 13 - Epilogue: Strong Arms and Spilled BloodSigned

This is a great story, superbly told. It has just the right blend of action, suspense, pathos, and comfort. You have great talent for taking Aragorn to the limits of his endurance before bringing him back to a place of wholeness and safety. I love your characterization of the strong bonds of friendship and loyalty that exist between Aragorn and his fellow rangers, and I love your original characters Denlad and Ferdinand.....the latter of whom is, by the way, sufficiently "Tookish"!!!! Bravo!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Those things... action, suspense, humor, comfort, pathos... are what I strive to hit in all my stories (at least the longer ones) so I'm glad you found them all present and accounted for in this one. :)   And the bonds between Aragorn and his Rangers, especially Halbarad and the OC's I created that form his "upper ranks", is something I'm fascinated by and love exploring, and what better way than to put poor Aragorn in a bit of a bind!  And Ferdinand... I just loved writing him.  He was my first attempt at writing hobbits and surprised me at every turn. 

So glad you enjoyed this and thanks for taking time to leave a review online. ;)


Michelle12/09/09 09:57 pm13: Chapter 13 - Epilogue: Strong Arms and Spilled BloodSigned

Ah, that ending gives a lot of food for thought. (And Butterbur surely makes it sound like Aragorn is a rockstar trashing his hotel room *g*). Very interesting choice to let it end on such a note, it certainly contrasts nicely to the rangers' interaction with Ferdinand.

Again, a wonderful fic from you! I always like coming back to them, because you make it work - within all the angst and everyone getting beat up (literally and figuratively) the characters hold everything together. And your characterizations skills are very strong - and that applies to all the characters.



Author's Response: Thanks, Michelle!  That's a high compliment, that you think I handle characterization well, because stories that don't are a bit of a peeve of mine.  I would hate to think I ever feel into the "poor characterization" category of writer.  I did want to leave this story a bit open ended, basically because at that period of time, Aragorn's life is nothing if not a bunch of loose strings waiting to be tied off.  From not ever really knowing their real enemies to having to protect an unappreciative people for who knows how long, life isn't easy or tidy for the Rangers or Aragorn.  I wanted to show that in the story.  I'm glad you enjoyed it, and very appreciative of your kind comments!

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