Here I am, finally:) You jump right in, do you? And it doesn't look too good for our heroes. They seem to be surrouned by scheming nobles who are trying further their own agendas. Not good, not good at all. I liked the beginning - the fever. We tend to forget that things like viruses and bacteria were unknown for a very long time and it seemed very unlikely for people that something invisible could cause illnesses. You captured that very convincingly.
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you liked the way the story started.You are right,things look very bleak indeed! |
